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Donuts Is Top. by ~CalebAaronOsment:iconCalebAaronOsment:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Romantic > Mature Romance > Song




Sometimes I lay awake at night.
And think of how I wish.
I could be sleeping with you.

And whispering the journeys.
That we'll one day undertake.
And while you're giggling, too.

I'd distract you for a moment.
Just a second.
Disappearing, in the blink of an eye.

And while I stroke your stomach down.
I'd stare at you.
And giggle that I love you.

The day begins.
The light is shining.
Dimly through the rose-tinted and coloured glass.

Your arms are wrapped around my waist.
My hands are very cheekily.
Against your ass.

I wriggle from the covers.
Brush the hair out of your face.
And give your cheek a kiss.

And while I make some toast for two.
I think about.
How much I really love you.

Later on.
I run the water hot for us.
And open up the shower door.

Invite you in, and giggle, blush.
And witness parts of you.
I'd never seen before.

And after washing you.
And making very sure.
That I had cleaned behind your ears.

I'd gaze into your glowing face.
And stroke it with my thumbs.
And say I love you.

The time has come where we part ways.
And spend a few lone hours.
Of our day apart.

To put bread on the table.
So that afterwards we have.
A nice and early start.

To our candlelit and moonlight dinner.
Overlooking sunset-ravaged.
Sand and sea.

And scream out loud across the bay.
That I love you.
And hope you also love me.

Sometimes I lay awake at night.
And think of how I wish.
I could be sleeping with you.

But then I softly shake my head.
And watch you sleep.
And realize that it's all come true.

As the morning daylight breaks.
I wriggle from the sheets around you.
There's so much to do.

But I take the time to kiss your ear.
And whisper ever softly.
That I love you.

I love you...

I love you...

I love you...
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Author's Comments

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Very loosely sung to the tune of the first verse of the song Somethin' Stupid, made famous through the cover version done by Frank Sinatra and his daughter Nancy.

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~CalebAaronOsment Jan 1, 2009, 6:47:40 PM
So you think donuts is tops too? :bucktooth::heart:

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can I keep you? :eager:
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~CalebAaronOsment Jan 1, 2009, 6:56:06 PM
:O I never knew there was a donut emoticon. :bucktooth:

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can I keep you? :eager:
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=Carousel-Dreams Jan 1, 2009, 7:07:03 PM
indeed, im just ninja :ninja:
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~CalebAaronOsment Jan 1, 2009, 7:53:42 PM
Donut ninja. :donut::ninja:

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can I keep you? :eager:
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~HeartRoyale Jan 15, 2009, 8:33:17 AM
The "ass" stanza seems out of place, but I likes it overall <3

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"We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars" ~Oscar Wilde
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~CalebAaronOsment Jan 15, 2009, 9:09:06 AM
How is it out of place?

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can I keep you? :eager:
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~HeartRoyale Jan 15, 2009, 10:02:32 AM
idk, just the word "ass" seems out of place, mostly from connotation, when the rest of the poem uses smooth, comforting words, just comes off harsh/crass even though it's not (just the connotation)

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"We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars" ~Oscar Wilde
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